Score: 8

"OMFG"

submission: Morphemon Duelists 1.1

date: June 9, 2005

.....1337
*slobers over animation*
you need....more racist stuff...
porn-rific images
...boners

wait sorry
um...it was good
add like more stuff stolen from the other shows
like poke***, yugi**, gun***, and powerran***
also...they need to find a freakin rare item that freakin makes them like gods

yeah, more sound is good or some guy saying *woosh*
sweet dude

Score: 4

"in need of more stuff"

submission: Mission: The Girl (Part1)

date: June 9, 2005

need more talking or endless boring stupid dialouge
or them fighting eachother over the whatever
and more funny
newgrounds is all about the funny
if you could just add...an old man telling them what to do...
an alien killing the old man
and the chicken song...you should be fine

Score: 2

"Interesting"

submission: Blood Fight

date: June 9, 2005

Try make a better background...more characters
make it more unique.
Lame ending btw.
Also...make characters unique
i'm fine with you using them
just...make them like stupid or funny
interactivity means i think you get to choose endings and stuff, yeah...
most part....EXPAND THE FIGHT

Score: 10

"Sweet"

submission: Secret Lives of Squirrels

date: June 7, 2005

better than some other cartoons, even on TV!
yeah sad...."oh, someone get him a real flash maker thingie!"
the tree was weird though, i didn't see the branches have leaves
or was they just cut off =P
perhaps having a little squirrly babe, in distress?=P

Score: 9

"Good vareity of Stuff"

submission: Dressup

date: June 5, 2005

Not organized, try that
need more hair styles and suits
good amount of accesories though
maybe something that make em have a big butt
making a female one?